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Old 06-29-2013, 04:51 AM   #16
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Write an erotic novel instead. Much easier to pick a name.
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Old 07-01-2013, 05:12 AM   #17
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I wish we all could get our hands on your novel when it's ready.
Will you publish it officially or in the net by any chance??
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Old 07-14-2013, 01:48 PM   #18
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Sorry, I have been terribly busy with my summer course. I have a responsibility to finalize a 100 page report that's due on the August 9th.


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Will you publish it officially or in the net by any chance??
Which ever requires less or no money, which is more likely the net. But I do want to publish it officially. :-)

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Write an erotic novel instead. Much easier to pick a name.
The murderer is gay. Is that erotic enough for you?

And yeah, I've realized that Casualty List does not sell well, and it sounds similar to Casual Vacancy.

So, as many of you suggested, there will be no title for this novel until it's written.

It's a very long story, and I'm still on the first chapter.
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I think you overused the whole "repetition for dramatic effect" thing. However, I do want to read more, so that's a sign of a good intro
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Good luck. I love the introduction you have given us.
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Sounds very emo to be honest.
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Good luck

How can I get one copy when it's finished?
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I didn't expect you to write something so dark/bloodthirsty as this
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People who bullied him.
People who hurt him.
People who abused him.
People who molested him.

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They killed his family.
His mother
His father
His brothers
You do have a fetish for unnecessary repetition.
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If you can outsell Fifty Shades of Grey I too shall write a novel, an erotic novel.

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