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Creativity Thread

Jag
11-28-2003, 09:48 AM
*edit*: I figure we should have a place for products of free creativity so here it is. Post what you will and feedback is guaranteed.

Right, so this ain't no Andy deal but I figure what the hell so here's some shit Lucidd wrote about me for a battle in the art of freestylin - Lucidd will explain. So anyways, here's Lucidd's:

uh ohhhhhhh - i think ive started SOMETHIN/ Call Romio a limp dick now it's a line you're JOCKIN/ Don't think i haven't read your shit and saw it HAPPEN/you stole my punch trick, now it's time for a bitch SLAPPIN/ This just in channel 69 DLS NEWS/ Reporter Ice just lost all her SCREWS/ Fateless gone crazy thinkin she can fill my SHOES/ Manic married hip hop, Ice is committing spousal ABUSE/ Now as i sit writtin i have to keep re-reading your THREADS/ cuz aside from my own you stole nothin you say sticks in my HEAD/ you trying to look badass - you just look fukkin stupid INSTEAD/ So come at me ho, tell me Im not an ORIGINATOR/ I've been in this for 16 years..how long have you been in the game FOR? / don't play stupid even though you're better at it than a blonde BIMBO/ we both know it was you that said I inspired your own flows a week AGO. / Don't get cocky cuz I called you out in some rhyme ALRIGHT/ I'm only challenging you cuz I'm too lazy to put effort into someone worth a real FIGHT/ I suggest you stick to gathering news for some BSB FANSITE/ Cuz you're so bad lyrically I'm ashamed to tell people it's rap you WRITE

And my reply was:

Oh my God I'm sorry I've been so long in replyin'/You crack me up good there's no use denyin'/I thought you did freestylin' not stand up comedy/Starting today that's how it gonna be/Damn Lucidd, sixteen years?/Could had me fooled cos you bring me to tears/What you lackin' in skill you can't make up/I guess that means you been lyrically stuck/Bringing to shame the other names in this game/Even for a two year old your spits are lame/Don't bring Ice into this frame, don't wanna take the blame/If the crowd get bored when they see this thread/So bored they immediately drop dead/Provin' that in fact you can die of monotony/Wake up Manic this ain't a monopoly/You can lose, but I ain't tryin' to fill your shoes/I already wear 'em bitch you gotta get some clues/I don't try to look badass, I am/I weren't gon talk but now I'ma blow this scam/Blow it right up so they see what you are/Cos this is one trick that's gone too far/It was funny in the beginning but now it ain't a joke/You keep pretending but I can see you choke/Searching for a way to be number one/When you know it ain't happenin' I leave you lyrically stunned/Don't make excuses I know why you re-read what I write/You need to 'borrow' some ideas for some other fight/If nothing I'll say you brave/Cos this be the battle to take you down to your grave

J. Corwin
11-28-2003, 09:50 AM
Deja vu

Jag
11-28-2003, 09:59 AM
*cheesy grin* lucidd made me do it!! lol

Prophetic
11-28-2003, 10:06 AM
lmfao...yeah..bent her arm behind her back...yo, dig up some of my old shit that actually means something while you're at it, lol...and for the record

Romio is a buddy of both of us and one time in battle I said that he had erectile difficulties to get a laugh out of people and then the next 3 people to battle or diss him after that...Jag included, said it too

Prophetic
11-28-2003, 10:07 AM
ok...and Ice and Fateless are 2 other nicknames that are common for JAg, lmao

Jag
11-28-2003, 10:10 AM
^^^ lmao, yup *has multiple identities* lol *arm still behind back* lmfao

Prophetic
11-28-2003, 10:10 AM
oh...and no beef here whatsoever...Jag and I are buddies but the goal of a battle is to totally tear down your opponent making them look as stupid as possible and with any luck...they'll be too chicken to reply. Jag and i got lots of love for each other.

PS..again..i do actually write shit that means something, this is just for a laugh

J. Corwin
11-28-2003, 10:11 AM
You forced her? How could you? lol...jk

andylover_16
11-28-2003, 10:14 AM
:banghead::banghead::banghead::banghead::banghead: :banghead::banghead::banghead::banghead::banghead: :banghead::banghead:

Prophetic
11-28-2003, 10:15 AM
lmfao...I'm still waiting for Ice to dig out one of my songs that has some substance to it

Prophetic
11-28-2003, 10:21 AM
Quicksand (first one I could find)



[Verse One::Lucidd]
Staring at this pad waiting for ideas to FLOW
But it's tough when I know I don't wanna do this no MORE
I still wanna show them but somethin inside just wants to GO
Somethin deep down beggin me to leave it BEHIND
Give it up before chasing this dream fractures my MIND
Fighting for a line, a single rhyme, no inspiration I FIND
Struggling to recover dreams hung out to DRY.
Thinkin back on the days when this was my LIFE
Everything I did was about my pen and my MIC
And a dream that filled my soul, consuming my NIGHTS
So I sit and I scribble these lines hoping I MIGHT
Recapture the drive that made the one with that LIGHT
That innate ability to always put up a FIGHT
Spit just one more rhyme, rock just one more TIME
But time I fear has lost her to ME
How can this be RIGHT

[Chorus One::Lucidd]
It's like I'm asking who I am and I find I don't UNDERSTAND
The answers that come back to suffocate me like QUICKSAND
I don't know what I am and I don't know where I STAND
But I know I'll find my way back to the woman that gave a DAMN (2x)

[Verse Two :: Romio]
Crumpled bits of paper scattered 'round all over the FLOOR
I write on... this wasted led, all my fingers so SORE
I write whats on my mind, but none of it ain't flowing no MORE
They been there, they done that, there's nothin' left to EXPLORE
It's just so hard when you feel like your flows are so BLAND
Ya put your heart in your words but no one gives a DAMN
It's like ya nothin, but you know your destiny's to be SUMTHIN'
Your hopes are lost with every paper that you're forced to be CRUMPLIN'
And all you want is for your dreams to become real LIFE
If it's not meant to be then just slash my throat with a KNIFE
Cut up my vocal chords and then cut off my fingers as WELL
So I can't write, speak or rap cuz I ain't destined to SELL
Forever driven for a life I may never get to LIVE
My dream to be number one, I'll give it all I can GIVE
I'm second guessin', I'm losin' hope, I'm losin' my MIND
I contemplate, to pursue it? Or to leave it BEHIND?
Cuz it's the life that I dream of, it's the life that I WANT
And to the haters and doubters, it's a life I can FLAUNT
But I'm lost, still second guessin', just can't figure it OUT
The answers to my questions that possess my mind with the DOUBT

[Chorus Two :: Romio] (x2)
It's like I'm askin' who I am, I find I don't UNDERSTAND
The answers that come back to suffocate me like QUICKSAND
I don't know who I am, which way to go or where I STAND
But I know I'll find my way back to the man that once gave a DAMN

Jag
11-28-2003, 10:23 AM
^^^ I don't know what you mean - everything you write has substance to it - rap is based on some aspect of the truth :p

Here's another:

Lyrically Inspired
The RemiXX
Aly Feat. Lucidd

[verse 1:: Aly]
*edited*

[chorus :: both]
All these vicious thoughts are still running through my head / Four thirty AM and I still can't go to bed / I know when they read this they'll be postin' in this thread / Should I let this go, or just keep goin' instead? / Nope, this inspiration still ain't dead / I'm gonna go ahead and just let these thoughts spread

[verse 2:: Lucidd]
Only talked smack once I knew you were sayin shit too
But herein lies the difference between me and you
I never cared if you found out I was doing it too
You run around hiding shit actin as though we're cool
But did you honestly think I'd stand forgiving you?
And now look at ya ass trying to be like me
Writing rhymes and trying too hard to be what I be
Calling your fake shit lyrically inspired
You ain't touched a mic in your life or set the stage on fire
You really think you're ready to go toe to toe with me?
One on one, head to head with a real MC
We can go face to face if that's really what you wanna see
I can wrap my hands around your neck and squeeze till your eyes bleed
Choke you slowly watching your life fade, now LOOK AT ME
as I laugh at your tears welling up while you beg me to breathe
You fake bitch rappin tough like you're ready for me
Then turn around when we speak and act like it wasn't about me
all you know of real beef is what you see on TV
Actin like I'm the Ja and you're the 50
When the only thing you got in common with tha G Unit G
Is that he was shot 9 times - You're about to be

All these vicious thoughts are still running through my head / Four thirty AM and I still can't go to bed / I know when they read this they'll be postin' in this thread / Should I let this go, or just keep goin' instead? / Nope, this inspiration still ain't dead / I'm gonna go ahead and just let these thoughts spread

[verse 3:: Aly]
*edited*

Jace - yeah, she forced me, can you believe it!! lol

andylover_16
11-28-2003, 10:27 AM
Quicksand (first one I could find)



[Verse One::Lucidd]
Staring at this pad waiting for ideas to FLOW
But it's tough when I know I don't wanna do this no MORE
I still wanna show them but somethin inside just wants to GO
Somethin deep down beggin me to leave it BEHIND
Give it up before chasing this dream fractures my MIND
Fighting for a line, a single rhyme, no inspiration I FIND
Struggling to recover dreams hung out to DRY.
Thinkin back on the days when this was my LIFE
Everything I did was about my pen and my MIC
And a dream that filled my soul, consuming my NIGHTS
So I sit and I scribble these lines hoping I MIGHT
Recapture the drive that made the one with that LIGHT
That innate ability to always put up a FIGHT
Spit just one more rhyme, rock just one more TIME
But time I fear has lost her to ME
How can this be RIGHT

[Chorus One::Lucidd]
It's like I'm asking who I am and I find I don't UNDERSTAND
The answers that come back to suffocate me like QUICKSAND
I don't know what I am and I don't know where I STAND
But I know I'll find my way back to the woman that gave a DAMN (2x)

[Verse Two :: Romio]
Crumpled bits of paper scattered 'round all over the FLOOR
I write on... this wasted led, all my fingers so SORE
I write whats on my mind, but none of it ain't flowing no MORE
They been there, they done that, there's nothin' left to EXPLORE
It's just so hard when you feel like your flows are so BLAND
Ya put your heart in your words but no one gives a DAMN
It's like ya nothin, but you know your destiny's to be SUMTHIN'
Your hopes are lost with every paper that you're forced to be CRUMPLIN'
And all you want is for your dreams to become real LIFE
If it's not meant to be then just slash my throat with a KNIFE
Cut up my vocal chords and then cut off my fingers as WELL
So I can't write, speak or rap cuz I ain't destined to SELL
Forever driven for a life I may never get to LIVE
My dream to be number one, I'll give it all I can GIVE
I'm second guessin', I'm losin' hope, I'm losin' my MIND
I contemplate, to pursue it? Or to leave it BEHIND?
Cuz it's the life that I dream of, it's the life that I WANT
And to the haters and doubters, it's a life I can FLAUNT
But I'm lost, still second guessin', just can't figure it OUT
The answers to my questions that possess my mind with the DOUBT

[Chorus Two :: Romio] (x2)
It's like I'm askin' who I am, I find I don't UNDERSTAND
The answers that come back to suffocate me like QUICKSAND
I don't know who I am, which way to go or where I STAND
But I know I'll find my way back to the man that once gave a DAMN


hey travis have a song called quicksand:o...lol...dont worry i feel better now i changed my avatar...aaa:inlove:

Jag
11-28-2003, 10:39 AM
Here's another with 'substance' lol:

What can I do with this sadness, madness overwhelming my soul/ I'm outta control, spinning downward quickly now, yesterday is tomorrow/ I'm consumed, confused, abused. Feelings of dispair and sorrow./ Psychosis washin over me. No way out but to drop a flow./ So I'm fuckin spellbound by all these people with a perfect existence./ A house in the Burbs, new car, 1 spouse, 2.5 kids./ With innocuous little issues makin 'em cry like bitches./ They have no fucking clue how hard life for one like me is./ Tormented, tortured artist teaching teenagers what free is./ Spittin shit substantial so they'll know mean Manic means business./ Priceless pain contained in my pencil. Pen flows, waken senses./ Reaching the masses with a message meant to enlighten the senseless.

And yes, me and Lucidd got mad love and respect for each other

Prophetic
11-28-2003, 10:41 AM
lol...damn i wrote that last one a long ass time ago

Jag
11-28-2003, 10:42 AM
yup, you did, it was a bitch findin' it lol, was that 'substance'? lol

J. Corwin
11-28-2003, 10:46 AM
Did you get Aly's permission to post that? lol

Or should I ask her myself? She's on away at the moment...I can leave a message for her lol.

And does this mean I should post some of my poems now? lol

Prophetic
11-28-2003, 10:51 AM
lmfao...aly likes her stuff being shown anywhere as long as she gets credit

and YES, post baby

Jag
11-28-2003, 10:51 AM
Oh whoops, shit, forgot about permission, I'll take Aly's verses out until she says I can post it lol and yeah, ask her please *grin* *don't have AIM right now*

And yes, post your stuff, you got mad talent :P

J. Corwin
11-28-2003, 10:55 AM
So what do I say to her? Um...Ice is in this other forums and she wants to post your flow..is it ok with you? lol

And gimme some suggestions you two. What poems should I post? I dont' wanna post all.

Jag
11-28-2003, 10:59 AM
Yeah, that's fine, I don't care lol

Post the Silhouette of a Rose one, that one is so beautiful and the one that's dialogue to a girlfriend or something, that's really pretty too

Prophetic
11-28-2003, 10:59 AM
uh...maybe just edit her part and don't ask...i don't want a DLS invasion here

A Moment Of Forever Bliss babe...that one is really wonderful...and your new one too

Jag
11-28-2003, 10:59 AM
^^^ Oh, so true, okay, so don't ask Aly, I'll just take her verses out

Prophetic
11-28-2003, 11:08 AM
Ice...you ought to change the title of this thread or the first post or something...cuz if anyone else out there writes it'll be cool to see their stuff in here...make it a kind of creativity thread

J. Corwin
11-28-2003, 11:11 AM
Well, here's 3 of my poems:



Silhouette of a Rose

Petals of a rose slipping away one by one
Its once flush red full of life no longer
The heavy weight of time seen taking its toll
Wilting under the darkness never to be again.

Desperate gasps for sweet breath of air
But no thought of care to the struggling weak
Hope and wish only to end in despair
Wanting to be shown love once more again.

Left bare and numb in the freezing cold
Denied a second chance of colorful living
Only half the size of what it once was
Dark face of loneliness to be seen again.

Poor sight of light now grows steadily faint
Dried and shriveled and falling apart
Only a shadow of its once living past
Tears of a breaking heart wept forever again.

The last petal falls from no strength left to hold
Leaving a sullen void of blank open space
Now only a silohuette of a rose once ignored
Being devoid of love it can live no more again.




Memoir

I dont understand
...please explain...
...please tell me what you mean...
...sweetie, please...
...no, no dont be like that baby...
...I'm at a lost for words...
...you, you dont know how much it hurts...
...to hear that...
...please, please dont do this to me...
...it doesnt have to be this way...
...let me explain...I only want what's...
...whats best for you...
...and you know that...
...please love, I dont know...
...what I would do if I lose you...
...I'm begging you...Im begging you right now...
...tell me...
...what can I do to get you back?




This one I've written to my ex when we were together...


Moment of Forever Bliss

When Im with you there is nothing else that matters
For you are my sole love, the one and only
Like the rose that blooms in full splendor
You have captured my gaze for all eternity
It is the truth and not a coincidence
I live in this cherished moment of forever bliss.

How I have yearned to be the perfect man
The one who fulfills all your hopes and dreams
Just a list of all the impeccable things
Oer the heart I know I cannot achieve
But it is for all to witness and truth being told
All for that very moment of forever bliss.

A shock of despair during the most turbulent times
A battle of diction and heat and emotion
Steadfast in opinion and no stepping back
Only later to realize the fool that I have been
In hurting I have stabbed myself and bled in knowledge
That I may have lost a moment of forever bliss.

The guilt that pains and haunts as in clever jest
Mocking my weakness and the exposure of vulnerability
How I wish to hear your voice during many a sleepless night
At my knees I would beg for a moment of forgiveness
To understand that not all has to be a sad end
For me to enjoy the moment of forever bliss.

In each and every single sweet kiss and embrace
Our breath and heartbeat in synchronous harmony
The passion and desire like the forever burning candle
Forever united as one in body and soul
Looking into your eyes never more beautiful
To express the truth in the moment of forever bliss.

If you only know my bottomless well of love
My life is whole and complete after having met you
How I would die and sacrifice my everything
To be right beside you and to feel your warmth
Knowing that you love me unconditionally too
And that together we share this moment of forever bliss.

Prophetic
11-28-2003, 11:22 AM
*claps* you're a true artist baby

J. Corwin
11-28-2003, 11:24 AM
thank you cupcake *hugs*

Prophetic
11-28-2003, 11:26 AM
*hugs* i swear you could make a living off poetry. :smooch:

J. Corwin
11-28-2003, 11:32 AM
*touched*

It'll be my back up of my back up career. lol

Prophetic
11-28-2003, 11:34 AM
lmao...for sure :) you're so good at it

J. Corwin
11-28-2003, 11:38 AM
So where we at now? Dr. Phil as my 2nd choice? lol

Prophetic
11-28-2003, 11:42 AM
um...nope, second choice is a commentator, third is a poet and fourth is philly

J. Corwin
11-28-2003, 11:46 AM
ah yes. forgot about the order of the totem pole.

Prophetic
11-28-2003, 11:48 AM
well at least you got lots of options, lmao

J. Corwin
11-28-2003, 11:53 AM
lol sure, that's always nice

Jag
11-28-2003, 12:34 PM
lol, you two took over the thread whilst I had chem!!! lol

For sure, Jace, you are what talent would look like in modern day America and together with Lucidd, you two would take over *runs* lol

J. Corwin
11-29-2003, 04:29 AM
Nah, there'd be no taking over. lol

yea go run like a lil bunny lol

Jag
12-01-2003, 11:15 AM
Why would I run if there's no taking over?

Jag
12-01-2003, 11:59 AM
Okay, here's another of mine. It's new, I just wrote it so what do you think?

Feels like Iím doing ninety five in the wrong lane/Still I step on the gas just to feel the pain/Life passes me by but I donít seem to care/All I want is to be anywhere but here/Trying to escape the invisible one/Chasing me down until the mission is done/Breathing on me sending chills to my spine/It just keeps closing in and taking all that is mine/My memories stem from me and stolen so fast/So temporary the contemporary a token of past/Blink once and I see a world of grey/Blink twice but that world did not stay/Painted in colours that blind my sight/Tainted by others unkind to my fight/Canít sense no sympathy no solidarity for my cause/I am alone in this journey canít stop to pause/Press rewind but it donít stay the same/With every playback I play a different game/Thrown into disarray like I always have been/Facing chaos head on even though I canít win/Force forward through traffic in the counter flow/Getting hit is just a matter of seconds so/Iíll keep my foot still hold my hand steady and wait for the score/That moment in time when I face first with the floor/Head rush blood run in perpetual motion/No fear no feel just statue emotion/And even then I am let loose just to go on the run/Steeling myself for the steel from the gun/But I suppose that would just be too easy/I be let off light if the hurt donít freeze me/Paralysing my body until I canít think/Only knowing that slowly I can feel my soul sink/Beyond the depths where I may come back/Clawing with bloody fingers but only claw black/Opening my mouth as I try to scream/Then I snap back and realise it was all a dream

Prophetic
12-01-2003, 12:12 PM
Ice, you have a talent beyond words...truly
*claps*

Jag
12-01-2003, 01:10 PM
I tried a variation on that multiples thing with a few lines except I'm not sure if it worked lol but thanks but it's only cos I learn from the best :worship:

J. Corwin
12-01-2003, 06:25 PM
*triple thumbs up*

oh wait, i only have two thumbs.
Two thumbs up!

heya
12-02-2003, 04:11 AM
*lifts big toes and thumbs up*

Prophetic
12-02-2003, 04:16 AM
I tried a variation on that multiples thing with a few lines except I'm not sure if it worked lol but thanks but it's only cos I learn from the best :worship:

lmao...none of that bowing crap. Some things cannot be taught.

J. Corwin
12-02-2003, 06:34 AM
Exactly. You have the natural talent Ice.

Jag
12-02-2003, 09:30 AM
Uh huh.

Heya, write somethin' so I can lift my head up at ya too lol

Some things can't be taught but these things can :p

J. Corwin
12-02-2003, 09:43 AM
Just keep trying to go the ways of self-deprecation.

It won't work I tell ya.

Jag
12-02-2003, 09:54 AM
I didn't even self-depreciate there!

J. Corwin
12-02-2003, 09:55 AM
Don't try to side step the subtle insinuation there.

The truth shall set you free.

Jag
12-02-2003, 10:13 AM
The truth shall be interred with those who seek it
*side steps the subtle insinuation*

J. Corwin
12-02-2003, 10:14 AM
Are you not a truth seeker?

Jag
12-02-2003, 10:34 AM
Na uh, I'm a truth deceiver

J. Corwin
12-02-2003, 10:37 AM
*backs away slowly...*

Jag
12-02-2003, 10:48 AM
Took you long enough lol

Prophetic
12-02-2003, 07:21 PM
pfttttt, lol

This is something Jag wrote for me and it's so sweet. *hug*

You are to me what Eminem is to 50 Cent/You the master of the lyrics to me the student/You introduced me to this art but you wonít take my thanks/You wonít believe that otherwise I would be firing blanks/I aspire to your genius the way I aspire to Em/You less like the rocks and stones and more like the gem/Teaching me and letting me learn from the best/So I can say out loud that I wonít burn like the rest/But I realise that you ainít invincible that sometimes you come down/And as a friend I will break your fall before you hit the ground/I ainít promising nothing iron clad but I will do what I can/Be there to back you up, just like a fan/But I ainít just a fan cos fans canít help you out/Whereas Iíma gon be there to do away your doubt/When youíre feeling like there ainít nobody else who cares or understands/Iíll be helping you say your prayers help you meet the demands/And even if itís not my help that you want or desire/Iíll still be sure you ainít alone to fight the fire/When the heat gets hot I ainít gon bail on you/Iíll stick around and do what a friend should do/Iíll stick it out wit you brave the storm wit you/Anything if it means you ainít gon be left wit you/All by yourself on your own to deal with the shit/The kind that damage bone for real if you canít ride with it/I know we ainít tight like Eminem and Fifty/But I promise you I ainít like others cos I ainít shifty/Iím as good as my word and my word is all that counts/Cos I ainít got the millions to make the amounts/Just because it ainít often that we talk or communicate/Donít mean that being there is a concept I canít know or demonstrate/I just hope you donít feel like you been booed off stage/Cos that only leads to bitterness which leads to rage/And if you got to rage then you goní get to hate/And by then itís not emotional itís a psychological state/And then itís gonna consume you and eat you up inside/And before you know you be wishing you had some place to hide/See I know what youíre going through I been there before/When it comes to pain you be the student and I be the law/So even if all my efforts are gonna go down the drain/Just know that somebodyís here to stop you from going insane

Jag
12-03-2003, 08:14 AM
*hugs* lol *feels embarrassed now* :P

J. Corwin
12-03-2003, 08:28 AM
Jag wrote this to me awhile ago. Sweet indeed. :)

When the sun stopped shining
And I couldnít feel warm
When the winds stopped whistling
And I couldnít feel at all
When sun up turned to sun down
And I couldnít see so far
When blue became grey
And I couldnít see beyond
A little miracle happened to me

When my mind fought against me
And I couldnít hear my thoughts
When my heart fought against me
And I couldnít hear my soul
When my body fought against
And I couldnít hear my pulse
When I fought against me
And I couldnít hear silence
A little miracle came true

When I lost faith in me
And couldnít find a way
When I lost hope for life
And couldnít answer why
When I lost belief in this place
And couldnít fight this fight
When I lost trust in reality
And couldnít get it right
A little miracle walked into my life

That miracle saved me
When I couldnít save myself
That miracle listened
When I couldnít stop myself
That miracle cared
When I couldnít care myself
That miracle was there for me
When I couldnít be there for myself
That miracle believed in me
When I couldnít believe in myself
That miracle had faith in me
When I couldnít have faith in myself
That miracle loved me
When I could only hate myself
That miracle, oh, that miracle
Was you

Jag
12-03-2003, 10:20 AM
You guys! Way to make me want the world to open up and swallow me!!

J. Corwin
12-03-2003, 10:37 AM
Why are you so shy about it? lol

Jag
12-03-2003, 10:50 AM
I mean, I don't mind it being up but it's just personal stuff seeing as how I write from the heart and I just hate seeing my stuff being put in a public place WITH my name attached to it, y'know? So basically, you can use it, just don't say it was by me :P

J. Corwin
12-03-2003, 10:54 AM
So sorry. I can take it down if you want.

Jag
12-03-2003, 11:08 AM
No it's aight :P just don't say it was by me :P

J. Corwin
12-03-2003, 11:09 AM
ahhh...ok.

NOTICE: The poem I had posted was NOT by Ice.

:p

Jag
12-03-2003, 12:06 PM
*shakes head* dude, you suck you dork lol kidding *is not Ice*

J. Corwin
12-03-2003, 06:03 PM
that's right

*uses a huge neon sign and points it at you* She's not Ice!

Jag
12-04-2003, 07:47 AM
Who me? lol

J. Corwin
12-04-2003, 08:03 AM
no, of course not!

Jag
12-04-2003, 08:08 AM
lol good good

J. Corwin
12-04-2003, 08:20 AM
*smiles innocently*

Jag
12-04-2003, 09:51 AM
*pokes you* okay, is this off topic-king again? lol

J. Corwin
12-04-2003, 09:53 AM
yes it is lol

Jag
12-04-2003, 10:50 AM
Damn, well tell Lucidd to copy and paste a flow I sent her in a PM which she coincidentally never replied to lol and get her to paste it *is too lazy to do it myself* :p

J. Corwin
12-04-2003, 04:32 PM
lol when i see her later, sure

Jag
12-05-2003, 08:39 AM
Okay, well, looks like Lucidd never got it so, here it is:

Got no time for posers so to those I say fuck YOU / And if you be just another then fuck you TOO / Best believe I mean what I say and I see it THROUGH / I only call it like I see it only say whatís TRUE / Damn tired of being treat like some charity ZOO / An endangered species that needs to be made an ISSUE / Yíall need to wake up and get you CLUE / Open up your eyes Ďfore I make you see black and BLUE /

And anything you get you bring upon YOURSELF / Because patronising and pitying me is consciously endangering your HEALTH / Do I look like I need any HELP / I be doiní alright in case you canít TELL /

I been surviving off my own back all these YEARS / No reason to think that suddenly, itíll bring me to TEARS / I can fight my own battles fight my own FEARS / Switch it up when I need to step up GEARS /

Donít depend on nobody, just what I GOT / Because when the going gets tough Iím all that is NOT / My so called friends will all run when the heat gets HOT /
Afraid of putting their necks on line afraid of gettiní SHOT / Or when the question gets put they just freeze on the SPOT /

Betrayed by the words that wonít say what they SAY / And I be betrayed because they canít get AWAY / With the truth that need telling for me to see a new DAY / So Iím done with relying on others just to stay where I STAY / I know itís tough but I know I is OKAY /

All I need is my bare hands be enough to get BY / Maybe I ainít bling and maybe I ainít FLY / But unlike the ghetto skanks I donít be neediní no GUY / Donít need to have to live with a bruise on my EYE / Or swallow my dignity cause I been forced to CRY / Iím sayiní before I go that far I be willing to DIE / My pride is all I need for me SURVIVE /

If I canít stand tall and say I can do it ALONE / I wouldnít be here instead of chilliní at HOME / Where all my stresses be about the new STONE / Sitting on the gold on my finger as I sit on my THRONE / Makiní up new ring tones to go on my PHONE

Until I get ready to go out and party all night LONG / Drinking the bar dry as I do all the WRONG / And gettiní dirty on the dance floor to my favourite SONG / I left that life behind for a life where Iím STRONG /

Where I may not be a socialite but where I know who I AM / Not just another poser pulliní a SCAM / Lying through my teeth to get me out of a JAM / Or measuriní all my cocaine down to the GRAM / No see there was a fatal flaw in the PLAN / There was this little crack that appeared in the side of the DAMN /

And I knew it was only a matter of TIME / Before all the walls around me fell in a LINE

Like dominoes set up and ready to GO / One leak and the chaos be ready to BLOW / And by then all I could do be to go with the FLOW / But I made the call right there to put a stop to the SHOW / My life ainít so fast but I enjoy it on SLOW /

Itís just I canít stand when people take time to pity ME / I only pity them back cause I be FREE / No bitching behind my back about the he or the SHE / Cut loose all my ties with the ones who canít BE / It didnít hurt none cause I knew startiní afresh was the KEY

I made my sacrifices now I pay my DUES / But at least now I got choices to CHOOSE / And I know that if I win some thereís also some I can LOSE / But all I care is that Iím only wearing my own pair of SHOES /

J. Corwin
12-05-2003, 09:40 AM
I've read that at another place, lol.

It's damn good again. You never fail to amaze me.

Prophetic
12-05-2003, 09:53 AM
it IS damn good....but it's also 5:30 am and i haven't slept yet so I'm not getting into the details yet...expect a full review later today, lol

J. Corwin
12-05-2003, 10:05 AM
lol you see that? You're gonna get a full critique from the best critic ever, lol.

Jag
12-09-2003, 09:49 AM
*is honoured* wow, I don't know what to say lol except...give it to me!!!! lol and also, I can't get into the Roddick forums :(

Prophetic
12-09-2003, 04:29 PM
haha..i'll get to it shortly...as you know I'm REALLY bogged down right now...and you got in just fine, lmao

J. Corwin
12-09-2003, 07:44 PM
I got your PM late, lol. Sorry about that.

Jag
12-10-2003, 10:13 AM
Again, don't apologise lol I got issues with that :P

And yup, s'all good, I'm logged in now the kaos has already begun

J. Corwin
12-10-2003, 06:38 PM
Coolness