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For Skyler: My Erotic poem, parental guidence suggested (this means you star) thread

J. Corwin
04-23-2004, 08:47 PM
:lol:

It's not that bad I don't think. I wrote this awhile ago but I'll post here for your entertainment. :)

Here you guys go (happy now, Skyler? ;)):


Moonlit Dream
(1/3/04)


Bathed under the glow of the luminous orb
Harmonious tranquility of blissful silence
Palette of stars adorn the sleeping night sky
Gentle flowing breeze of magical air

Sure slight whispers of romantic nature
Shuffling feet in a most enchanted unison
Gliding across a never-ending floor
Shadowy figures entranced in the moment

Surreptitious yearning of playful tease
Boundless time with infinite pleasure
Subtle hints filled with intimate secrecy
Tantalizing coax lures a loving fantasy

Silky smooth skin in perfect fluid motion
Slippery warmth with a trace of seduction
Hypnotic gaze never more spellbinding
Delightful gasps of sweet amorous souls

Fond hearts bountiful in charmed fascination
Mesmerizing fragrance welcome each breath
Relaxing allure cools to a peaceful slumber
Heartbeats forever together in a moonlit dream.

-Jackson Ma

MisterQ
04-23-2004, 09:07 PM
*swoons!* ;)

Fumus
04-23-2004, 09:07 PM
:worship: Romeo Allez!

MisterQ
04-23-2004, 09:10 PM
:worship: Romeo Allez!

:lol:

MisterQ
04-23-2004, 09:12 PM
jackson I feel like setting that to music, with a lush Puccini-esque late Romantic orchestration :lol:

but i'm too lazy...

Fumus
04-23-2004, 09:18 PM
Q you didn't read my last poem in the ode to Andy....take a look!!

J. Corwin
04-23-2004, 09:32 PM
jackson I feel like setting that to music, with a lush Puccini-esque late Romantic orchestration :lol:

but i'm too lazy...

And I was starting to think that the poem was too risque cuz no one was replying. :lol: But I knew I could always count on you to understand. ;)

You should listen to Lovland's "Song from a Secret Garden" Absolutely beautiful! Very powerful, emotional, dramatic.

Brad Fiedel's "Love Scene" is great too. Both are instrumentals and no voices. I'm a sucker for slow romantic music.

andyroxmysox12191
04-23-2004, 09:55 PM
jace that was amazing! who would've thought that you could write something so beautiful ;)

J. Corwin
04-24-2004, 05:21 AM
I just reread the title of this thread and realized that it can be mistaken...people might think I wrote that poem TO Skyler. :eek::lol: