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post #46 of 50 (permalink) Old 07-29-2005, 10:16 AM
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Wonderful story, thank you!!!
But it`s so sad!
Please give the story new end once again!
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post #47 of 50 (permalink) Old 09-28-2005, 09:49 AM
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I know that I'm really late but I still can't understand why do you think the ending is sad?? I think this is a good ending. Maybe you'd prefere wedding or sth?? Well maybe someday it'll be next part of it. You know you can write it yourself if you want and post it here or send it to me. I don't know maybe some of you likes to write make up stories?? 'Casue when i started to write this one i couldn't stop and now i'm writing sth new. But I'm not going to post it here 'casue it's not about JC but it is about tennis But if you would like to read it you can always send me PM and ask

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*Carlos*Bryan Brothers *Andy R.

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post #48 of 50 (permalink) Old 09-28-2005, 10:17 AM
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i wanna read it and i think loads of us want to

why is it easier to hurt someone with words than with deeds?
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post #49 of 50 (permalink) Old 09-29-2005, 04:24 PM
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well I feel really sad about Rafa, Sarah was very very close with him, and suddenly Juanqui came back.... and there wasn't a word about Rafa anymore, he's just forgotten

and tommy??/

(I asked this before but you didn't answer:P)


Voiceless it cries,
This thing all things devours:
Wingless flutters,
Birds, beasts, trees, flowers;
Toothless bites,
Gnaws iron, bites steel;
Mouthless mutters.
Grinds hard stones to meal;

Slays king, ruins town,

And beats high mountain down.

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post #50 of 50 (permalink) Old 10-01-2005, 07:09 PM
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Well yeah it may sound cruel about Rafa but he was just her friend and Tommy was fell in love with someone totally different.... Gosh maybe I have to write next part??

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*Tommy *Fernando *Feliciano*Rafael *JCF
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