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Create Your Own Poem Thread!

No poetry chat thread here yet, eh?

Well, I feel like sharing one. I wrote this a few months back, and is dedicated to those who do not give up:


Hard the fall did break the bone
and sharp the pain that hit the nerve

Rough the storm weakened the soul
and farther did the target go

Sharp the rocks that bleed the feet
whose mind wavered just a bit

Blind the light that meets the eye
made the path twice as wide

Thirst one need to satisfy
made a hint of turning round

Yet on and on to where no one's gone
moving forward and beyond

To reach the goal the motivation
for champions move forget frustration

Pain will come and pain will go
but courage not all people know

Feel free to join in and express yourself! But please try to avoid the corny love poems

It's always Night, or we wouldn't need Light. - Thelonius Monk (via Thomas Pynchon)

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