Here we go:
Groundstrokes I think were pretty good, again BH slice can improve. The serve, I thought the toss was good, just need more back bend, specifically upper back bend, and more follow through with the shoulder.
Next time I play with someone else, I'll rig the camera on the fence, but with this, you basically see where I am at.
Everything was Ok till i saw You serve..
.. WTF was that? Have you learnt serving a week back or something ? You really look like a non sports person trying to serve Tennis...
I dont want to discourage you but you have some decent groundstrokes but that serve is pathetic. Do you get those balls over the Net ?